Let’s try some poetry – be kind, I really new at this!

Indeed!

This was an exercise in observation and writing concrete poems where every word counts. The assignment was to submit 12, one on each page. Here are 2 of mine.

Mornings

7am
Is too early
For heavy machinery

At the concert

Viola warming up
On stage
Murmurs of audience
Check tickets
Check rows
Check seats
Walk past
Excuse me excuse me excuse me